Résumé Help: There’s No “I” in Résumé
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One of the common résumé mistakes is to use a non-conventional format. The problem is that the reader will assume that you either don’t know how to write a professional résumé or that you thumb your nose at résumé standards and go your own way. Either impression is not good. Professional résumés are written in a staccato format. Elements of the staccato format include:
- Pronouns are omitted. (Instead of “I managed,” you would write, “Managed.”)
- Numbers are not spelled out (“13” instead of “thirteen.”)
- Concise, direct language is employed.
Today’s candidate, Chad, started his résumé with a very chatty narrative. It is unprofessional for multiple reasons. First, he is not following the standard résumé format (staccato style). Secondly, he uses some language that may seem too casual for some hiring managers. He also he takes a bit of a dig at fellow team members by saying he beat their records. That makes him appear as a lone wolf, rather than a team player. Lastly, take a look at the sample to see suggestions for replacing weak language with language the really sells him.
Chad is a star. That’s a fact. However, his résumé was holding him back from many opportunities. With a few changes, he can get back into the game with a winning résumé. If you need help creating a new résumé, contact me. I would love to help you get you into the game. For more articles on this subject, click on these links:
Résumé Help: Creating a Compelling Profile